Thursday 28 September 2017

little miss muffet

Every weekend

Mrs and Mr Muffet are a couple that do not stop fighting.They live in a beautiful little cottage in Whitianga right across the road from the beach and have the noisiest neighbors that could possibly exist.They own a little four square on the corner that is always packed with people coming and going to the beach.


Mr and Mrs Muffet can’t sleep in on the weekends because all of the kids are screaming their heads off. On one particular bad day, Mrs muffet went over and yelled at them because they were as loud as the horn on mr muffets minivan .The neighbors carried on screaming and shouting. She was almost going to call noise control.Mrs muffet angrily marched back inside and demanded for food.


Mr muffet had already started to make bacon and eggs but then Mrs muffet came in and said I'm allergic to eggs. Mr’s muffet screamed at Mr muffet and she demanded him to make her some waffles for breakfast. Mr muffet had not been taught how to make waffles before. Queried as Mr’s Muffet had not heard the word I have not been taught how to make waffles before



Mrs muffet was in a bit of a mood so she decided to for a drive to the tihoi tavern but when she went to get in the car she noticed a big scratch across the door panel. She shouted “who scratched my car!
Mrs muffet lumbered over to the neighbors house and screamed at the kids and they had to wash Mrs muffets car for free for 6 weeks the kids weren't impressed.Angrily she stormed to the car and took off.


As Mrs muffet was zooming along the highway she got a phone call from Mr muffet he said that one of the neighbors got ran over by a motorbike.Mrs muffet was even angrier then she has ever been before. She took off faster then she ever had before. She got  home home and saw a kid lying on a stretcher with a broken leg. The little girl was screaming and the mum was in tears. Mrs muffet burst into tears and thought that she should be nicer to her neighbors.


After a long day visiting the little girl at the Hospital she came home and baked the girl some cookies and invited her over to swim in the pool with Mr and Mrs muffet but she had to put a plastic bag over her cast. It was hard to convince her to swim in the ice cold water


Ten years later her leg was all healed  and she went to the man's house that ran her over and he was  a very nice and caring guy. When she walked over to the front door the man let her in and admitted that he did not mean to run her over he was just waving to his friend and the next thing you know you had been run over and he said that he would always  take more care when he was  driving and keep his  eyes on the road.


And the neighbors became best friends and always went over for a swim in Mrs and MRs muffets pool
In the summer and they enjoyed a nice Christmas.

Thursday 7 September 2017

my speech

I think dogs are better than cats

To start us off,  if a burglar came too close to your house your dog would start yapping its mouth off and what would a cat do? Come and jump on you and say meow? I believe they wouldn’t even do that because they’re either too lazy or asleep not caring about a thing (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

Secondly dogs are way more energetic than cats, do you see a cat go to a park and play fetch?   I’ve seen a dog go to a park and play fetch but I’ve never seen a cat walk with their owner to a park and  play fetch (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

There are a lot more benefits of owning a dog, for instance dogs are more potty-trained than cats because when my dog needs to go to the toilet she  barks and then I let her to the toilet. But when it comes to cats don’t they just try and hide it under a bed or on the floor. And dogs don’t need litter boxes so you can actually save money (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

Did you know that scientists said that dogs can make us fit by needing to go out for runs/walks everyday. So that means if we take them and if they get fit then we get fit at the same time (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

Dogs will bring you your slippers and then you go and put your glasses on to see what’s happening and then you see your cat with a dead mouse in it’s mouth and puts it in your slippers without you realising. Then when you go to stand in your slippers and what do you feel some squishy feeling and wetness wait you look at your feet no its blood pouring out then you have to go and buy some new slippers (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

Lastly cats are killing lots of endangered birds per year so that could mean that they are, killers!!! Soon we will not have any species of birds all because of cats and because no one listened to me saying that dogs are better than cats. Like come on people, listen with your taringas. Then that means we could actually have some birds in this country. That also means if you have a pet bird and a pet cat you will no longer have a bird during the night unless you have fed it like a good pet owner (That’s why dogs are better than cats).

So in conclusion, trade in your pussy cat for a tough, protective dog..you won’t be sorry.
That’s why I think dogs are better than cats!!!

Sunday 3 September 2017

sick sentences and speech

a million matchbox houses’ is an example of alliteration. Can you create an alliterative sentence to describe something else the skydivers might see beneath them



A trillion houses  getting closer and closer by the second and the water was getting darker and darker and holding for his life.


Sick Sentences
These sentences are sick and need your help to get better.
Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary.


Sam terrified with his skydiving mates as they held on to each other with their lives at skeak. It was terrifying screams sam.


I think dogs are better than cats


To start us off,  if a burglar came too close to your house your dog would start yapping its mouth off and what would a cat do? Come and jump on you and say meow? I believe they wouldn’t even do that because they’re either too lazy or asleep not caring about a thing (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


Secondly dogs are way more energetic than cats, do you see a cat go to a park and play fetch?   I’ve seen a dog go to a park and play fetch but I’ve never seen a cat walk with their owner to a park and  play fetch (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


There are a lot more benefits of owning a dog, for instance dogs are more potty-trained than cats because when my dog needs to go to the toilet she  barks and then I let her to the toilet. But when it comes to cats don’t they just try and hide it under a bed or on the floor. And dogs don’t need litter boxes so you can actually save money (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


Did you know that scientists said that dogs can make us fit by needing to go out for runs/walks everyday. So that means if we take them and if they get fit then we get fit at the same time (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


Dogs will bring you your slippers and then you go and put your glasses on to see what’s happening and then you see your cat with a dead mouse in it’s mouth and puts it in your slippers without you realising. Then when you go to stand in your slippers and what do you feel some squishy feeling and wetness wait you look at your feet no its blood pouring out then you have to go and buy some new slippers (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


Lastly cats are killing lots of endangered birds per year so that could mean that they are, killers!!! Soon we will not have any species of birds all because of cats and because no one listened to me saying that dogs are better than cats. Like come on people, listen with your taringas. Then that means we could actually have some birds in this country. That also means if you have a pet bird and a pet cat you will no longer have a bird during the night unless you have fed it like a good pet owner (That’s why dogs are better than cats).


So in conclusion, trade in your pussy cat for a tough, protective dog..you won’t be sorry.
That’s why I think dogs are better than cats!!!


As they floated peacefully through the air, Sam noticed something unusual, just at the foot of the Palm’s trunk. His eyes widened as it came into view with the cars and soon coming in range to see the people and his eyes started to water then boom goes the parachute.
Which are the adverbs in the sentences below? Highlight the adverbs.

      Bravely, Jimmy urged his bike to an even greater speed. The engine beneath him roared
      angrily as it responded to his touch. Clouds of dust flew up into his face, grit grazing
      his chin painfully.

    Sick sentences! These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better.

       Can you help?. Rewrite the sentence underneath the sick sentences.

    The rider held on. His bike was going quickly over the ground. It was really dusty. He felt    

       excited and scared.


The brave rider held on with fear yet excitement while dust flying at him at one hundred miles an hour.

Wednesday 31 May 2017

100 word story 2

Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths   Success criteria
!!!!I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE!!!!
  1. Apostrophes
  2. Sentence starters
  3. Full stops. And comas,
WIDE ORANGE CROCODILE WITHIN COLLAPSED



Isnt it annoying when you dont know what to write because thats what is happening to me right now. Its annoying because everyone else has a great or even awesome stories that they have been doing for the last half an hour which would be nice for me but I cant think of anything but I can think of a big fat wide orange crocodile that has collapsed. Actually if you think of that is quite weird and cool like a collapsed crocodile I have never seen that before I dont think many other people have as well bye.

100 word story

Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths   Success criteria
  1. Sentence starters
  2. Full stops. and comma,
  3. Apostrophes
What are you eating?
How does it taste?
How should it taste?
Is there something wrong with it or is it you?



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Cookie monster

Who took all my cookies from that jar!!! You what are you eating and how does it taste is it yum better say yes or you give me my cookies from your stomach so how are they I made them with eyes,boogies,dribble and spew suddenly he said no but how sould it taste.Then he ran away but the cookie monster caught up with the man how should it taste he said and the cookie monster said delicious and he said that I wasnt so called delicious well there is there something wrong with it or is it you, you should love It like everyone else does and like me.



  • What are you eating?
  • How does it taste?
  • How should it taste?
  • Is there something wrong with it or is it you?

selfie writting

Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths   Success criteria

  1. Sentence starters.
  2. Full stops. and commas
  3. apostrophes’

Selfie writing - first draft
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Wait what where am Ive got a lamborghini that has just been painted in purple and orange.I cant drive Im too young, AHH someones coming gotta get out of here.No hang on they are going somewhere whos that, that is KSI and this is his lamborghini!!! They’re gone now but now I need to get out of here, Im trapped with all the doors shut and here comes the pigs.Nine years later just got out of prison then the world ends no ones alive any longer.

succse criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths   Success criteria

Wednesday 5 April 2017




"What are you thinking about now?”
 “So I am really, really, small”

Sunday 2 April 2017



Monarch butterfly

Name
Monarch butterfly
Scientific name
Danaus plexippus
AKA
Beautiful flying bug
Classification
Kingdom: Animalia (animals
Phylum: Arthropoda (arthropods)
Class: Insecta (insects)
Order: monark butterfly

Description
The monarch butterfly is like you could say that it is like a miniature baby bird but much prettier and smaller.
Diet
For the butterfly's food it is weird they only eat like milkweed.
Habitat
Butterfly.
Last known location
In your garden.
Good/bad
good
Where they live
Every where