Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths Success criteria
- Sentence starters.
- Full stops. and commas
- apostrophes’
Selfie writing - first draft
Wait what where am I’ve got a lamborghini that has just been painted in purple and orange.I can’t drive I’m too young, AHH someones coming gotta get out of here.No hang on they are going somewhere who’s that, that is KSI and this is his lamborghini!!! They’re gone now but now I need to get out of here, I’m trapped with all the doors shut and here comes the pigs.Nine years later just got out of prison then the world ends no one’s alive any longer.
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