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!!!!I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE!!!!

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WIDE ORANGE CROCODILE WITHIN COLLAPSED

Isn’t it annoying when you don’t know what to write because that’s what is happening to me right now. It’s annoying because everyone else has a great or even awesome stories that they have been doing for the last half an hour which would be nice for me but I can’t think of anything but I can think of a big fat wide orange crocodile that has collapsed. Actually if you think of that is quite weird and cool like a collapsed crocodile I have never seen that before I don’t think many other people have as well bye.

100 word story

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What are you eating?

How does it taste?

How should it taste?

Is there something wrong with it or is it you?

 

Cookie monster

Who took all my cookies from that jar!!! You what are you eating and how does it taste is it yum better say yes or you give me my cookies from your stomach so how are they I made them with eyes,boogies,dribble and spew suddenly he said no but how sould it taste.Then he ran away but the cookie monster caught up with the man how should it taste he said and the cookie monster said delicious and he said that I wasn’t so called delicious well there is there something wrong with it or is it you, you should love It like everyone else does and like me.

• What are you eating?
• How does it taste?
• How should it taste?
• Is there something wrong with it or is it you?

selfie writting

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Selfie writing - first draft

Wait what where am I’ve got a lamborghini that has just been painted in purple and orange.I can’t drive I’m too young, AHH someones coming gotta get out of here.No hang on they are going somewhere who’s that, that is KSI and this is his lamborghini!!! They’re gone now but now I need to get out of here, I’m trapped with all the doors shut and here comes the pigs.Nine years later just got out of prison then the world ends no one’s alive any longer.

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